你管我呢 发表于 2014-2-23 17:19   全显示 1楼
了不起的文笔！构思相当的严谨！虽然本章没有任何的肉戏，但是相当的温情啊。尤其前面的描写，充分的让大家体会了这两兄弟的矛盾心里。侧面也凸显了哥俩的善良。看着这两兄弟前途凶险啊，真替这两个兄弟担心。
再有就是对作者ps来说，我个人认为小姑需要好好的描写一下！主要是看这样接下来是大场面，十分期待作者的控制能力啊！
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